Wednesday, June 3, 2020

100 Word Challenge

100 Word Challenge

I just went for a walk down the street.The sidewalk walk was
glistening. It was pouring but I didn’t care.
All of a sudden headlights flashed in the distance at first
I didn’t think much of it. Until they slowed beside me.
Every turn I took, they took.
All of a sudden they stopped and one of them got out and
charged at me. I didn’t know what to do. It was like I was frozen
but time passing so fast each second was like a millisecond.
My instincts kicked in. this is when i knew I should run.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Bridie,
    You created a lot of tension in your story. At first I wondered why you didn't care that you were being soaked. Maybe you were upset and needed to get away or maybe you enjoy being out in the rain!
    Your story became more frightening with the arrival of the car that followed you. Your description of feeling frozen to the spot and then following your instincts is very good.
    Well done.
    Mrs O Sullivan.