100 WC
It was an average day. I woke up, went to school, came home and got changed. I walked down stairs and I felt something was wrong. MUM! DAD! No response. So I shouted again. I finally reached the bottom but no mum or dad was found. Just a pile of groceries on the table unpacked. Suddenly I heard tapping on the walls. The tapping moved so I followed it. It led to dad’s office. I wasn’t allowed in there. The door was cracked open so I peeped through. A pile of work was sitting there and that's when I saw it.
very very nice. i like how u put the 'and thats when i saw it' at the end. it makes it a very good clifhanger
ReplyDeleteHi Bridie
ReplyDeleteYour 100WC is great. You started off so normally, but had a lovely twist to the story. The prompt at the end keeps the reader guessing. Fantastic.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Hi Mrs P!
Deletethank you for your lovely comment and i'm glad that you enjoyed my story i tried to make my story tense and add a twist at the end.
Bridie