Monday, June 29, 2020

100 WC

                   100 WC

It was an average day. I woke up, went to school, came home and got changed. I walked down stairs and I felt something was wrong. MUM! DAD! No response. So I shouted again. I finally reached the bottom but no mum or dad was found. Just a pile of groceries on the table unpacked. Suddenly I heard tapping on the walls. The tapping moved so I followed it. It led to dad’s office. I wasn’t allowed in there. The door was cracked open so I peeped through. A pile of work was sitting there and that's when I saw it. 

2 comments:

  1. very very nice. i like how u put the 'and thats when i saw it' at the end. it makes it a very good clifhanger

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  2. Hi Bridie
    Your 100WC is great. You started off so normally, but had a lovely twist to the story. The prompt at the end keeps the reader guessing. Fantastic.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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