The worst had come across the jungle, the jungle had gone into serious drought. Animals were dying like leaves falling from trees. New born babies barely hanging on. The elephants were used to drought but it was even getting bad for them. The only resource of water was blood which meant more and more animals dying but blood didn’t last long and the elephants wanted to speak up, so they called a jungle meeting. Every animal was curious so they all came, the monkeys, tigers, lions, cheetahs, birds, alligators and crocodiles were all there then the Elephant delivered his speech.
What a great way to set the scene. I could so imagine it. Well done!
ReplyDeleteDear Bridie, I like how you start your speech it gets the reader interested and wants to know more about it. In my opinion what you could do better would be to put in more descriptive language and some metaphors and similes. From, Isabelle.
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